Sani Posted May 10, 2017 Share Posted May 10, 2017 Hi, Everyone. this is my first game ( At least the one that got completed). I wanted to make some money out of it. Since this is my first game, I didn't have high hopes. But I got rejected by every sponsor I contacted ( I mean the few who replied). So, Anyone who can give me some pointer on how I can make this game or any future game that I'll be making better. please check out my game lolly match . Any feedback will be appreciated. Thanks in Advance. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leonylyner Posted May 11, 2017 Share Posted May 11, 2017 Mechanics is smooth and background music is good. But I think the game play might be too plain, adding power-ups, abilities or monsters might be better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sani Posted May 11, 2017 Author Share Posted May 11, 2017 @leonylyner duly noted. I'll try to add some of the features you mentioned. Thanks for the feedback. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milton Posted May 11, 2017 Share Posted May 11, 2017 Lose all the text. Just make everything obvious. Let me click a color, and just give me all the connected ones. Once there are no more connections, you automatically reload. Improve the Sun eating 'animation'. Just cutting it off is not good enough. Add some 'twinkle/bling' etc. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sani Posted May 11, 2017 Author Share Posted May 11, 2017 @Milton thanks for the feedback. Originally i wanted to do all the tutorial by graphical hints. In the end I choose text because it was easier to implement. You're right i should've done it the right way. The automatic reload thing needs some alternation in the source code (I did similar thing in a different game. Here i thought i'll give player some choice so they can fill any color they want. You know what i think i'll do both). ANYWAY ANYONE PLAYED IN A PHONE. I think it has some performance issues there. And at the moment i don't have a clue how to solve that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
away168 Posted May 13, 2017 Share Posted May 13, 2017 Really nice game, especially for first game. The tutorial is quite long and I just clicked through it. I ended up do not know what I'm doing though due to that. It's also hard to differentiate the orange and the red color for the bubble (the ones queuing to the sun) especially when it's almost empty. Might wanna try to brighten it a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sani Posted May 13, 2017 Author Share Posted May 13, 2017 @Alectora thanks for playing my game. I plan to completely change the tutorial section.I'll look into the other thing you mentioned. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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