Smrdis Posted December 21, 2014 Share Posted December 21, 2014 Hi. We almost finished our new game. Road Safety: http://hypnocatstudio.com/roadsafety If there is any native English speakers, could somebody help me with tutorial texts please? I translated it from Russian using google translate and my Engrish, probably texts are very poorly %). I'll be grateful for any feedback. orange08, drmop and SolarJS 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bambo Posted December 21, 2014 Share Posted December 21, 2014 Well polished game with nice graphics (especially when played on mobile). I came to 25th level and I had to restart some levels to pass them but the real troubles started on 24th level. BTW You must make good money off your games if you can afford to buy so many billboards with you logo along roads Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aegis Posted December 21, 2014 Share Posted December 21, 2014 Nice little game. Love the graphics and music. Some grammar "fixes" (English isn't my first language but I've lived in Britain most of my life so hopefully I'll be able to give some advice) First text tutorial: Instead of "Help people cross the roads and not die." maybe replace it with: "Help people cross the roads without dying"Second text tutorial: Instead of "Tap or swipe humans to make them move forward." maybe use "Tap or swipe people to make them move forward." because "humans" sounds kind of weird but it's up to you. Third text tutorial: "To pass the level this number of people need to be saved."Also it wasn't very clear how to get three stars. I just assumed you had to get everyone or nearly everyone to safety to get three stars. Good luck it's very nice game! Smrdis 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smrdis Posted December 21, 2014 Author Share Posted December 21, 2014 Well polished game with nice graphics (especially when played on mobile). I came to 25th level and I had to restart some levels to pass them but the real troubles started on 24th level. BTW You must make good money off your games if you can afford to buy so many billboards with you logo along roads Thanks for feedback! Good idea about billboards. Does anyone want buy it ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smrdis Posted December 21, 2014 Author Share Posted December 21, 2014 Nice little game. Love the graphics and music. Some grammar "fixes" (English isn't my first language but I've lived in Britain most of my life so hopefully I'll be able to give some advice) First text tutorial: Instead of "Help people cross the roads and not die." maybe replace it with: "Help people cross the roads without dying"Second text tutorial: Instead of "Tap or swipe humans to make them move forward." maybe use "Tap or swipe people to make them move forward." because "humans" sounds kind of weird but it's up to you. Third text tutorial: "To pass the level this number of people need to be saved."Also it wasn't very clear how to get three stars. I just assumed you had to get everyone or nearly everyone to safety to get three stars. Good luck it's very nice game! Thanks for your help with texts. I really appreciate it. About 3 stars system. You can get 1, 2 or 3 stars (no 0 stars option), so 1st star you get after complete level, 2nd star you get if nobody died, 3rd star you get if you spend less than 70% of time. Do I need to explain this in tutorial? What do you think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apelmon Posted December 22, 2014 Share Posted December 22, 2014 Fun game. I completed 24 levels.Played on the Android device.Top side filled white color sometimes. Good luck . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smrdis Posted December 22, 2014 Author Share Posted December 22, 2014 Fun game. I completed 24 levels.Played on the Android device.Top side filled white color sometimes. Roadsafety.png Good luck .Thanks for bug report. Seems like, I need to recache background if device orientation changed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aegis Posted December 22, 2014 Share Posted December 22, 2014 Thanks for your help with texts. I really appreciate it. About 3 stars system. You can get 1, 2 or 3 stars (no 0 stars option), so 1st star you get after complete level, 2nd star you get if nobody died, 3rd star you get if you spend less than 70% of time. Do I need to explain this in tutorial? What do you think?I think it needs to be more clear how to get three stars without actually saying how to get three stars. It should just be obvious to the player that you need to complete it in a certain amount of time and get everyone to safety to get three stars. The first and third stars you've done a good job of implementing. Maybe you could implement something like this for the second: Instead of how many people you've saved out of how many you need to save, you have a percentage of how many people are left over the percentage you need to save to pass. At the start it will be at 100% obviously and as you lose people it will decrease. When it's at 100% a little gold star will be in the top right corner of the percentage to show that you'll get the third star. It's completed when all people are saved or dead. Whatever percentage you have at the end is then checked against the percentage needed to pass. Would this work? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smrdis Posted December 22, 2014 Author Share Posted December 22, 2014 Sounds sensible, thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smrdis Posted December 28, 2014 Author Share Posted December 28, 2014 2 AegisI will add you to credits in "special thanks" section. What is your name? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aegis Posted December 28, 2014 Share Posted December 28, 2014 2 AegisI will add you to credits in "special thanks" section. What is your name? Haha, thank you, my name's Alena but you don't have to. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shoozes Posted December 30, 2014 Share Posted December 30, 2014 Very cool game here. I love the blood splat when someone gets crushed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drmop Posted December 30, 2014 Share Posted December 30, 2014 Great game, well polished. Death animation is quite funny Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smrdis Posted January 8, 2015 Author Share Posted January 8, 2015 The game available for non-exclusive license now. My contacts:skype: smrdis_mail: [email protected] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Olle Posted January 28, 2015 Share Posted January 28, 2015 Fun and polished. Well done!It seems like there is a sub-second delay of the audio effects on chrome @ android (galaxy s4) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smrdis Posted January 29, 2015 Author Share Posted January 29, 2015 Thanks Olle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harrywatson Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 YES ! By YES ! I mean great game ! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ousaf Posted January 31, 2015 Share Posted January 31, 2015 great game but cars move very fast at the initials levels Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xjesus666 Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 Nice graphics! Well played on my Android tablet. I guess you can add hotkeys above little victims in browser version. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crayonHero Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 One of the best and most polished html 5 game I have played so far Good luck with the sales! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gwenm Posted March 10, 2015 Share Posted March 10, 2015 Hello, I love your game is it possible that I added to my site? If you are ok, I would write a nice article for my readers. I would need additional information such as a description, how you get the idea, how long for developement, what tools ... anything that is of interest to know. My site is French and I will take charge of the translation.I hope to see you soon, thank you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smrdis Posted March 11, 2015 Author Share Posted March 11, 2015 If I understand correctly you do not plan to license my games. Thanks for you offer, but I do not do charity work, sorry . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gwenm Posted March 15, 2015 Share Posted March 15, 2015 Ok, no problem Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ousaf Posted May 8, 2015 Share Posted May 8, 2015 I think your game has been stolenCheck the following linkhttp://m.spiele-kostenlos-online.de/games/roadsafety/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marcgfx Posted May 9, 2015 Share Posted May 9, 2015 good game. sometimes I do feel a lot of luck is also involved, but its still pretty addictive and fun! If you plan to add advertising this could be to your advantage i guess, good luck Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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